Women's National Book Association

Writers on Writing

by Beth Lieberman


Fall 2003

Writers on Writing

It’s a verb, a noun, an emotion, a way of life, a vocation, an avocation, a burning in our souls, a desire in our hearts. We can never do enough of it; we can never have enough of it. We hope the following thoughts, suggestions and resources about writing will be helpful and inspiring. Thank you to all who contributed.
 

On Writing, and Writing Well

Beth Lieberman, New York and Los Angeles

Writing is bliss. Writing is lonely, difficult work. There is much to know if one wants to learn this craft. However, the keenest of all writing’s challenges is the putting of oneself onto the page, re-vealing the pieces we des-perately want to keep hidden away because of their judgment, passion, aggression, blindness, admiration or whatever else we prefer not to reveal, certainly not to the faceless reader who we hope will pick up our work and see it all. But the efforts that go into putting words onto the page so they are delectable, so they en-rich people’s lives, tell an unforgettable story, intro-duce ideas, prove points and uncover truths become worth it when someone does read our work. Writing is, at its best, revealing. Several books on writing sit on my shelves. Each title represents one aspect of what I spend my professional life doing: editing, writing and coaching au-thors. There is John Gardner’s The Art of Fiction and Renni Browne and Dave.

King’s Self-Editing for Fiction Writers for novelists looking to learn their craft, Vivian Gornick’s The Situation and the Story for writing the per-sonal narrative, Michael Larsen’s How to Write a Book Proposal and Susan Rabiner’s Thinking Like Your Editor for developing nonfiction books and proposals to market them. There are books for inspiration: Anne Lamott’s Bird by Bird, Betsy Lerner’s The Forest for the Trees, Mario Vargas Llosa’s Letters to a Young Novelist and a slew of others, no less worthy but too numerous to list here, that I use on a regular basis to remind myself and to teach others. While books on the subject can be helpful, if you really want your literary efforts to be read, there is no substitute for the triumvirate of writing, rewriting and showing your work. It is not over after the writing part. Rewriting is next,

a la-borious process, one that forces you to exercise a dif-ferent set of muscles and do it over and over again. (I of-ten tell my clients the average number of revisions a novel goes through before serious publishing industry consideration is 10.) The next step – showing your work – is the kicker because it means possible rejection or more revisions. Either one can be painful to con-template. But getting back to the writing, Annie Dillard said it beautifully: “One of the few things I know about writing is this: Spend it all, shoot it, play it, lose it, all, right away, every time. Do not hoard what seems good for a later place in the book, or for another book, give it, give it all, give it now. … Some more will arise for later, something better. These things fill from behind, from beneath, like well water. Similarly, the impulse to keep to yourself what you have learned is not only shameful, it is de-structive. Anything you do not give freely and abun-dantly becomes lost to you. You open your safe and find ashes.” Reveal. It’s worth it.?

Writing Resources

Answers to the question, What can’t I live without?
• On Writing Well by William Zinsser and The Elements
of Style by William Strunk and E.B. White. (Victoria Den-gel, New York)
• The Mid-Manhattan Library in Manhattan. (Julie Ellis,
New York)
• The Synonym Finder from Rodale Press. (Jackie Pels,
San Francisco)
• www.askjeeves.com. (Aurora Ferrero, New York)
• Writer’s Digest Book Club (wdbc@fwpubs.com). (Car-ole
Spearin McCauley, New York)
• Ayn Rand’s The Art of Fiction. (Diane Patrick, New
York)
• The Art of Fact: A Historical Anthology of Literary Jour-nalist,
edited by Kevin Kerrane and Ben Yagoda. (Linda
Crosson, Dallas)
• The second set of editing eyes from my writing partner
who reviews everything I write. (Janet Reid, New York)
• The Situation and the Story by Vivian Gornick. (Lori
Lynn Turner, New York) ?

Writing Tips

Hints, techniques and advice (gentle and not-so-gentle) from members who have been there: A fast, easy way to improve writing is to minimize prepositional phrases. Often, the phrase can be turned into an adjective: “The first of the fruits from the summer gar-den” can become “The summer garden’s first fruits.” (Linda Crosson, Dallas) Disbelieve any big theories and those who espouse them, telling you that unless some impossible require-ment is first met – graduate from an MFA program, get reborn in a differ-ent skin in a different culture – you should not attempt to write. Big theo-ries and those who espouse them are disheartening, self-indulgent – and deadly. (Talia Carner, New York) I’m always shocked to hear es-tablished writers say that they com-plete a manuscript, then go back to fill in research. I believe this is terri-bly wrong – since extensive research can redirect and enrich a book’s plot-line. (Julie Ellis, New York) F. Scott Fitzgerald had a great tip: “All good writing is swimming under water and holding your breath.” (Carole Spearin McCauley, New York) I have found that choosing a subject close to my heart, whether appears to be commercially viable not, is the best investment of my writing time. (Lisa Mullenneaux, New York) I read things out loud, and I copyedit backwards: finish to start. (Janet Reid, New York) The difference between writing fiction from a necessity to record a flow of inspiration and writing fic-tion from a decision to try to create a story is like the difference between dancing with a partner with whom you are in love and dancing with a partner to whom you were assigned. (Ann Lutzky, San Francisco) Put it aside; then read it aloud. (Jackie Pels, San Francisco) Persistence! (Jennifer Bayse Sander, co-author of The Complete Id-iot’s Guide to Getting Published, San Francisco)

Top 10 Things Not to Do
When Approaching
a Publisher

1. Don’t tell me your book has everything. It doesn’t.
2. Don’t tell me you’re the next John Grisham. You’re not, and one is enough anyway.
3. Don’t tell me I’d be foolish not to publish your book. I’ve been called silly over less.
4. Don’t submit without doing your homework.
Spend time in your library and bookstores, and familiarize yourself with Literary Marketplace and Writer’s Market.
5. Don’t bug me. Drop me a follow-up postcard if you must, but be patient. Some publishers take months to respond to submissions (if at all).
6. Don’t get discouraged. One publisher’s slush pile is another’s gold mine.
7. Don’t expect me to edit your book for free. Hire a good editor and proofreader before submitting.
8. Don’t pretend to be something you’re not. Write what your heart tells you to.
9. Don’t take it personally.
10. Don’t stop writing.

(Editor, writer and publisher
Amy Lyles Wilson, Nashville)

Five Things to Remember
When Writing

1. Be focused: set aside dedicated time just to write when you’re not going to be juggling other tasks.
2. Be verbal: read everything you write back to yourself aloud. Check for clarity and flow.
3. Be repetitive: after you’ve corrected your work, read it back aloud – again.
4. Be patient: put what you’ve written aside for a week and then go back and review it.
5. Be open: ask friends to read and comment.
(Author and Bookwoman co-editor
Debbie Gisonni, San Francisco)